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The single most important task of any romance writer is to show us
why the heroine and hero fall in love. Too often, authors seem
willing to fall back on the convenient “instant attraction” scenario.
One smoldering look and the two are off and running. Mary Balogh never
falls into this trap. Her protagonists may experience a sudden
attraction; they may even act on that feeling. But by the end of the
book, the reader always understands why the two fell in love and
believes fully in the “happily ever after.”
Slightly Scandalous is a perfect example of Balogh’s skill at
showing two people who fall in love almost without knowing it. Lady
Freyja Bedwyn and the Marquess of Hallmere begin their acquaintance with a slightly scandalous encounter in a country inn. They set the Bath gossips a-chattering with a set-to in the Pump Room and with their
unconventional behavior and betrothal. Neither is expecting to fall in
love.
Lady Freyja, the eldest sister of the Duke of Bedwyn, is on her way to
Bath to visit a school friend. Bath may seem an unlikely destination for this strong-minded and hoydenish young woman, but Free simply cannot return to her home and listen to everyone talk about the impending birth of an heir to Kit, Viscount Ravensburg. Four years ago, Kit and Free had fallen madly in love, but her brother had convinced her to honor the arrangement with Kit’s older brother, Jerome. But Jerome had died before the wedding and Wulf and Kit’s father had arranged a match. But rather than responding with joy, Kit had brought home a fiancée of his own choosing. Free simply cannot bear to be nearby when the proper if lovely Lauren dutifully produces an heir to the earldom. Hence the journey to
Bath.
As she stops for the night in a country inn, Free’s sleep is interrupted
when an incredibly handsome man seeks refuge in her wardrobe. Joshua
Moore, Marquess of Hallmere is fleeing from an angry grandfather with
entrapment on his mind. Their next encounter is equally shocking;
walking in Sydney Gardens, Free comes across the man from the inn
apparently forcing his attention on a serving maid. When she sees him
the next day in the Pump Room, she takes him to task for his
ungentlemanly behavior, only to have her quarry turn the tables on her.
Despite this rocky start to their relationship, Free and Josh discover
that the presence of the other in Bath is the only thing that makes the
staid resort tolerable. When Josh seems likely to fall once again into
the clutches of a determined matchmaker, Free agrees to a pretend
betrothal to save him. She thinks it will be such fun and can be ended
in a day or two. But the best laid plans often go awry.
This is the fourth book which features Lady Freyja. Balogh has thus had
time to slowly uncover her character. In A Summer to Remember,
she was the disdainful rejected woman, full of anger and pride. In the
two intervening books, she has become a more likable character, as we
learn more about her life. In Slightly Scandalous she emerges as
a fully sympathetic person. Now we understand that she was deeply hurt
by Kit’s behavior, that she did love him. Free fears that she will never
again experience the passion that she and Kit shared all those years ago.
Josh seems an unlikely mate for Lady Freyja. With her unusual looks, she
will never be considered a beauty while he is as handsome as Adonis. If
their status is the same, their lives have been very different. Free has
always been one of the proud Bedwyns; until five years ago, when his
cousin died, Josh was a poor relation in the Hallmere household who had
apprenticed himself to a carpenter. He may now be rich and titled, but
while Free accepts her rank unquestionably, Josh feels like an impostor.
Yet it soon becomes clear - at least to the reader - that these two are
well-matched. It just takes them some time and the intervention of Wulf,
Duke of Bedwyn, to come to the same realization. Watching the process is
most enjoyable.
This is the second time recently that Balogh has used the “pretend
betrothal” scenario. It is a mark of her talent that the two books are
so very different. Balogh continues to be without peer in creating
compelling, moving and enjoyable romances. Like all her other books,
Slightly Scandalous will go on my keeper shelf.
--Jean Mason
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