| The only reason this book makes it to three hearts is the
fact that the end is set up as a cliffhanger, and even with
everything else that is wrong, several of the characters are
compelling enough to make the reader interested in the
fulfillment of their story.
Morgan Kingsley, according to the blurb and to her own
description of herself, is a bad-ass exorcist. During the
course of the book, the only demon she exorcises is Dominic,
the boyfriend of the head of the demon-relations police,
Adam. Shortly thereafter, it is discovered that she has
become the host of an illegal demon herself, although not by
the demon's choice; he's a demon prince forced into her body
by his younger brother's political faction. Rightfully
distraught, Morgan at first ignores the problem, which leads
to bigger problems like her best friend (also an exorcist)
trying to kill her, being set up for murder, and her house
being burnt down.
Finally convinced that this isn't something that will just
go away, Morgan takes the demon, Lugh's, advice and goes to
Adam, who was the first to recognize that she was possessed. Or, at least, partially possessed; it turns out that
Morgan's so tough that she subconsciously keeps Lugh from
taking over her body, and he can only get to her when she's
sleeping or has been knocked cold.
The first thing you'll notice about Morgan is her
overinflated ego. For some reason, the author feels that
several earrings, a tattoo, and leather pants make someone
tough. Morgan whines, always runs to someone else with her
problems, ignores advice given to her by those wiser than
herself, and can't manage to keep her mouth shut. The last
causes a lot of problems between her, Dominic, and Adam
(mostly because she doesn't agree with their S&M sex
practices), but Dominic and Adam stick around because Adam
is one of Lugh's lieutenants. There is a little bit of
underlying sexual tension behind Morgan and Adam's
relationship, and despite her prejudices, she has a hard
time restraining herself when exposed to Adam and Dominic
being passionate. Which comes up a lot; Black uses Adam's
and Dominic's sexual relationship to make up for lack of
progress in the plot.
In theory, this should have been an exciting book.
Unfortunately, for the first two-thirds, Jenna Black was
trying too hard to be Kim Harrison. By the time her
own - fairly interesting in its own right - voice came
through, it was too late to salvage the story. The climax
is too short, especially considering how drawn out and
involved the rest of the book is. The background regarding
demons in this alternate society is very good, but too much
time is spent with Morgan's rants about her beliefs and not
enough time is spent developing her or any other characters.
Morgan had a steady relationship with a normal human lawyer
before all of this came up, but his kidnapping and
subsequent torture are the only interesting parts of the
plot (besides the unusual club scene to which Adam and
Dominic introduce Morgan). She finally stiffens her spine
and dumps him to protect him, and you're left to wonder if
the odd and slightly uncomfortable buzzing between she and
Adam will go anywhere in the next book, or if her attraction
to the demon prince Lugh will ever go anywhere.
The group
that attacked her is still widely at large, so the plot is
left hanging in the middle. I will definitely want a look
at the next book, which tells me that the author has
potential. Sadly, her first book is a flop; hopefully by
the next one, she'll be more comfortable with her own
abilities and her characters will be more at home in their
lives.
Readers who, like Morgan professes to be, are uncomfortable
with alternate lifestyles will not enjoy this book. All of
the sex scenes are fairly vivid, and when Adam and Dominic
become important characters, most of those scenes revolve
around them. In short, this book had the potential to be a
good suspense, romance, or erotica, and didn't manage to
quite pull off any of the three.
--Sarrah Knight
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