| The second heart is only for decent action sequences in this
disappointment by McCray. What would have been a palatable
if predictable romantic suspense quickly (and by "quickly",
I mean within the first ten pages) became tawdry due to the
characters' inability to think about anything but sex (and
most of the time, their thinking was pretty repetitive
and a little offensive). Despite the fact that our main
character, Anistana King, is in a witness protection
program, the constant danger to her life plays a backseat
role in Moving Target.
Daniel has been Ani's guard from the beginning, and from the
beginning (even though Ani is 7 sizes smaller now than she
was at the time of her family's tragedy, which throws Daniel
enough that you get to read about it five or six times) the
two of them have had the hots for one another. Two years
before, Ani's father had tried to cut his ties with the
Russian mafia. Ani walked in on him being murdered, with
her mother and sister close behind. The house was torched,
and Ani was only able to drag her sister's body out with
her.
Now, as Ani Carter, Ani lives in Arizona working in an
antique store while she waits to testify against the man and
the organization that killed her father. After making a
critical but well-meant error in judgment, Ani needs to be
rescued by Daniel. Since this all happens days before the
trial for her family's murderer, Daniel just heads toward
NYC where Ani will await the witness stand. Mayhem, of
course, ensues, people die, and Daniel and Ani just keep
running and endangering more people. Well, when they're not
having or thinking about sex, anyway.
Good bones, right? Unfortunately that's about all there is
for actual writing; the remaining three hundred pages is all
sappy romantic dreams, cheesy sex scenes, or even cheesier
(hey, we're working on a Velveeta commercial here) make-up
scenes. The one pitfall to Ani and Daniel's relationship
comes when she discovers he's kept a fairly important secret
from her, but since it was part of her witness protection
contract, she doesn't hold a grudge for very long. All in
all, the plot is left in the dust of Ani and Daniel's
not-too-creative sex life.
Ani, Daniel, and all of the
secondary characters are pale shadows of real people with
actual problems despite the fact that the ordeal Ani's been
through should make her one truly interesting person to
read. The book is simple and clichéd, and I won't even call
it a quick read because I never did get involved enough for
any kind of escapism. Sorry, folks, but a book that makes
you aware of every page you turn is not worth the time.
--Sarrah Knight
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